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Post by Easy John on Nov 6, 2009 16:49:24 GMT -5
Copy and Paste this and make a new thread with your name on it: In Character: Name: Easy John Age: 47 Power (if applicable): Grade (if applicable): Family: Likes (at least 3):Women , parties, and working out Dislikes (at least 3):nasty people, junk food, and cold fish Strengths (at least 2): love able , and easy Weaknessess (at least 2):can be talk into it by sweet talk, can end up naughty Fears (at least 2):not many. death and disease Desires (at least 2): lust, love and good friends History (at least a paragraph): I was born on the east coast, spent some time in the army, college, work and now i ready to have fun Sample roleplay (at least a paragraph):I like to be don juon or be capture by amazon girls.. so either a lover or a slave lol Out of Character: It would be out of character as mean. i only like to tease Name/Alias (what you want to be known as): EASY JOHN How long have you been rping? few days How did you find us? sammi
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Post by Sammi <3 on Nov 6, 2009 16:56:34 GMT -5
Where to begin... 1. Your name can NOT be Easy John. It needs to have a first and last name like a normal human being. Fix it please.
2. You didn't fill out your power or grade or family.
3. "not many" is not a fear
4. History is not a paragraph and tells virtually nothing about your history. Expand that.
5. Sample roleplay isn't even close to a sample roleplay. If you need to know what one is, look at other people's applications.
So fix all I just commented on and we'll see if you get accepted next go round.
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